My Brother, Jealousy and Getting Over Ourselves

My Brother, Jealousy and Getting Over Ourselves

[Tweet “When my older brother Ray put his friend into a coma it changed my life but it took me forty-five years to figure out how.”]

When I was twelve my family moved from one-hour outside of New York City to the Upper Peninsula of Michigan and one-hour away from a JC-Penny’s. We were raised Presbyterian, but because we had the distinct hallow-eye’d look of Ann Frank and everyone else in the White Pine, looked very Scandinavian, we became the town’s diversity—before diversity was a good thing.

I coped by being careful and good and funny which was like an invisibility cloak in high school but as much as I tried to blend in, my older brother Ray stood out in the most threatening way possible for a good girl and that was as a bad boy.

At home we called him, Open Crab Face sandwich because I don’t think douche bag was a recognizable slur at that time. I used to say that my brother suffered from a case of severe assholishness, but I said it quietly and to myself because my father didn’t need any help pinpointing my brother’s shortcomings.

My father was and is best described as an intense, idealist with a steel girder of a work ethic and a charm that wears thin under the gun of his laser focused attentions. And there I sat, at the nexus of my brother Ray’s crummy moods, ADHD or Asperger’s and my father’s galvanic need to fix him. I was the North Star right in the middle of the war between the Big Dipper and Cassiopeia except I was a rarely sited star in the constellation of our family even though I longed to be seen.

Here’s how it went with us. Never mind where we were, New Jersey, New York City or Northern Michigan my father would, with well-rehearsed words say,

“We’re going out to dinner. Tonight is a treat. The treat is, being together as a family, and giving your mother a break from creating a meal. This was his sizzle reel and tagging mom added the emotional component to the pitch. Because he was looking forward to the night out, and possibly had some kind of amnesia where my brother was concerned. Then his big finish, his hook was, “Everyone pick something affordable. “Ray,” he’d say. “No steak.”

My brother would say, “DAD. I get it.”

Outside the restaurant, just before swinging the door wide and walking inside my Dad would stop us and say,

“Now remember everybody, this is for Mom. Let’s focus on why we are here.” My brother would slouch through the door and my dad would whisper into his teenage ear, “Spaghetti “and then it was dead man walking all the way to our seats.

At the table, with the waitress looming, my father would raise his eyebrows as if to say, Ok, people, this is not a drill.

One by one, we would order; Veal for my mother, lasagna for me, my dad a pork chop or the fish, and without batting an eye my brother would say, “Steak please.”

The rest of the night would become one long unbroken monologue delivered by my father on gratefulness, frugality, and the value of the dollar. I had my own ritual. I’d give my mom a panicked look and we’d scuttle to the restroom where I’d stand in the bathroom stall, head over the toilet, gagging. I was a sensitive kid and between the car ride (motion sickness) and the constant anxiety of being surrounded by the anticipation of battle, barfing seemed like sweet relief. It was my mother that suffered the most though, her only night out in months was to be spent rubbing her anxious daughter’s back or listening to a filibuster at table-twelve.

 The thing about my father is this, he believed that if his lecturing didn’t have the desired effect it was because the listener didn’t or couldn’t fully comprehend his logic, his high level thinking, and the best course of action was, logically, more lecturing.

Ray and I had bedrooms on the same floor, across the hall from each other and night after night my father would sit on Ray’s bed and layout the error of my brother’s approach to life and fill in with his own recipe for success.

Night after night, I’d listen to the low rumble of only my father’s voice across the hall, so grateful that I wasn’t on the receiving end of his fervent reasoning, on the one hand and on the other hand wishing for a vowel or two thrown in my direction. Once, tired of being the good, forgotten girl, I said to my Dad,

“Could we talk a little?”

He said, “Sure, what do you want to talk about?

I hesitated and said, “I don’t know. Maybe something nice. Butterflies?”

Without hesitation, because my father rarely hesitated said, “I don’t know very much about butterflies.” And off he went secure in the knowledge that the kid who wanted to talk about butterflies wasn’t doing drugs.

Ray’s poor judgment, miserable friends and defiance carried him through all of his years in high school, creating a groove in our familial interactions like the ruts of the Oregon Trail. Fixing Ray was our homesteading and nothing would divert us from this path.

Then, after years of trouble; slashed tires, stolen tests, drunken night time pass-outs, and fairly obvious drug use, the months before graduation Ray seemed to settle down.

In an unrelated action and totally out of character, my father purchased a used 1970 Ford Mustang. He wasn’t the type to buy toys and suddenly there were a lot of new vocabulary words in the house. Mint condition, Blue Book, resale opportunity, investment. I was wholly uninterested except when I heard my brother reason with my dad just after pulling the new car into the driveway.

“Just let me take it out for a quick drive. Just for a few miles. Trust me.”

 I don’t know what possessed my father to hand over the keys that day, but I like to think it was hope. More likely though it could have been the irrational belief that if you knock your head against a wall enough times that wall eventually turns into a door. Frankly, it’s more likely that my father had the unshakeable belief in his own salesmenship rather than any mystical feeling of hope.

The how or the why didn’t really matter in the end. In the end, that rarely matters.

Later that night, I was in the basement practicing my flute, my mother darted into my room saying,

[Tweet ““Ray’s been in an accident, we’re going to the hospital.” And she and my father disappeared. I waited and upon their return I got the details of the accident along with a few more vocabulary words: Survival rate, coma, manslaughter, jail time.”]

That day, with keys in hand my brother picked up two friends and sped off down the two lane country road that runs parallel to Lake Superior in a town, called Silver City. Another friend was in the car in front of him and my brother accelerated. They were most likely racing. When the car ahead, slammed on his breaks, with no functioning tail lights, my brother, a 17 year-old inexperienced driver in a car he’d never driven before, swerved left then right, and drove headlong into the slag-filled ditch and slammed into a tree, inches before hitting Lake Superior. The boy in the passenger seat flew through the windshield and the boy in the back, Jamie Lockart, flew between the bucket seats and rammed his head into the dashboard.

When my brother came home from the hospital with bruises on his head and chest and a deep gash in his leg, nobody looked happy, relieved or grateful. Over the next weeks dark circles formed under my brother’s eyes, his skin yellowed and he lost weight. Night after night my father sat in his room trying to impress upon him the severity of the events, what was likely to happen if the boy in the coma didn’t wake up or worse, died.

Graduation day came and there was no joy in Muddville. If before the accident we were seen as outsiders now that feeling had been amplified and we were thought of those people who brought this plight to their community.

At the ceremony I remember the stares. I remember my brother looked like a sweaty, boiled egg in his shiny red graduation gown. I remember the lack of applause when he walked across the stage. But I don’t remember me in this scene. I was never present during my brother’s drama. I lived in my head and only in my head: angry, silent, mortified.

To make matters intolerable, the plan for the graduation night was to go out to dinner. There was only one restaurant in town, The Konteka, where I worked bussing tables. We all assumed we would go there but, when my father turned left instead of right and headed out onto the highway I heard my brother shout,

“Where are we going?”

I don’t remember how my father figured out that my brother had plans to go to graduation parties after the ceremonies. My mom and dad had made an a priori decision. We were driving an hour and a half to Houghton, MI to eat dinner at a restaurant called The Summer Place and stay the night. The entire ride, my brother looked like a cat in a cage that was filling up with water.

 I had to hand it to my parents, this felt heroic. Looking back, I believe my parents thought Ray might kill himself if left to his own or his friends devices and my dad finally stopped talking and did something.

It was a checkmate and the most miserable dinner I’d ever spent a night hovering over a toilet through.

As if to mock us, the silent, sulking family, the restaurant played the sound track to Andy Williams’s A Summer Place-there’s A Summer Place where it can rain or storm and I’m safe and warm over and over and over again.

 The boy in the coma woke up and before the end of the year walked and miraculously talked. There may have been a civil suit, maybe not, I don’t remember. My brother’s bruises healed and he went on to wreck more cars, notably the one that was supposed to be mine. An old red VW beetle that once my brother rolled, the tires folded under it as if it were a real bug playing dead.

Ray went to college and we really didn’t interact for years except on break or Christmas. I dreaded these times. No one could make me angrier than my brother. He knew calling me goody-goody, and Miss-Free-Ticket-to-Life was a kind of mocking taunt. He was wicked, he knew the truth,

“You maybe be awesome but the old man doesn’t give a shit about awesome.”

After a while I stopped coming home. One time, just last year in-fact, at a family reunion, I told my brother to go f*** himself after the first fifteen minutes in a visit together.

Until this past summer. My parents had their 60th wedding anniversary. My mother has advanced Alzheimer’s and only remembers my father who is her full time caregiver. My father has chased away something like 20 nurses with his continued lectures on doing things his way.

At the anniversary dinner I noticed my brother Ray seemed an entirely different person, relaxed, happy, even chatty. I went defensive as usual but saw that something had lifted, he wasn’t the Open Crab face Sandwich I was used to. Curious, I impulsively volunteered to drive him to the airport.

All the way to the airport I drove, teeth clenched waiting.

Just before getting out of the car he said,

“Hey, Uh, I just want to say something to you. I want you to know that I was always so jealous of you that I just couldn’t be nice to you. I want you to know that’s over now. I’m over it. I can’t believe it took me 45 years to get over myself. I want you to know you’re amazing and I love you.”

And there, at the Delta Airlines drop off, I saw our relationship unroll like a scroll to be read. My brother wanted less of my father’s focus and I wanted more. This brick wall of envy that had lived between us fell and ironically it took me 45 years and ten minutes longer than my clueless, irritating, brother to figure it out.

This was originally published in Writer’s Digest


  1. Gail Johnson on August 24, 2016 at 1:56 am

    Oh, my God, that is such a wonderful piece of writing. I couldn’t get the link to work, so I kept trying different ways to get the end of the piece. I had to know what happened. I love that you put Ray’s childhood picture up with the piece. You are so honest and real. I guess I still like a happy ending, so I am glad you and Ray don’t have the brick wall there any more. Thanks so much for sharing this.

    • Ann Garvin on August 24, 2016 at 8:59 pm

      I’m glad too and thank you so much. I loved writing this piece. It felt good to get it out there.

      • Donna Farrer on August 26, 2016 at 5:00 pm

        Amazing… that’s you! Thank you for your awesome and honest writing and for sharing this story! I’ve got chills and tears after reading it. In some round about way with no specific comparison that I can pinpoint what you wrote somehow resonated with me and my past. Good vibes to you 🙂 and Ray!

        • Ann Garvin on August 28, 2016 at 5:13 pm

          Thank you as always :). You know I think any time you get to write emotion you can connect with people on some level. Glad this connected with you. 🙂

  2. Tom Fendrick on August 24, 2016 at 3:10 am


    • Ann Garvin on August 24, 2016 at 9:00 pm

      Thank you Tom

  3. Jane Ellen Smith on August 24, 2016 at 3:40 am

    You draw the tears from me every time.

    • Ann Garvin on August 24, 2016 at 9:00 pm

      And you do the same for me Jane.

  4. Mary Soileau on August 24, 2016 at 7:51 am

    That was a beautiful, gut wrenching story, Ann. You’re amazing.

    • Ann Garvin on August 24, 2016 at 8:58 pm

      Awwww, thank you so much. I’m glad I’m on the other side looking back. 🙂

  5. Lori Nelson Spielman on August 24, 2016 at 11:24 am

    What a poignant story, Ann. Thanks for sharing.

    • Ann Garvin on August 24, 2016 at 8:58 pm

      Thank you so much Lori, I appreciate it so much.

  6. Lynne on August 24, 2016 at 11:39 am

    I love how your story unfolded. LOVE. May this be the beginning of many years of good ol brother sister FUN!

    PS. Gotta run. I can’t put my ” I like you just fine when you’re not around ” book down. Soooo good. Sofa-king good. xoxoxoxo

    • Ann Garvin on August 24, 2016 at 8:58 pm

      Next I’m going to writer your love story. I read your last post and it was beautiful. I think about you and Michael all the time.
      Love to you.

  7. Suzanne on August 24, 2016 at 1:14 pm

    This spoke to me in so many ways. Thank you for sharing your story and your beautiful, funny, emotional writing–it’s tough to combine those elements and you do it with such grace and ease. Loved it.

    • Ann Garvin on August 24, 2016 at 8:57 pm

      Thank you so very much–I’m so glad we speak the same language. I’m glad this spoke to you. 🙂

  8. Rebel Sowell on August 24, 2016 at 1:46 pm

    Wonderful story. Seeing some of the similarities in our lives made me cry. Wish I could write about my family as well as you.

    • Ann Garvin on August 24, 2016 at 8:56 pm

      I think you can Rebel. YOu are a wonderful writer 🙂

  9. Brenda Kula-Pruitt on August 24, 2016 at 2:14 pm

    How beautiful and poignant a testimony about siblings that know one another, obviously, but really “don’t” know one another.

    • Ann Garvin on August 24, 2016 at 8:56 pm

      Thank you Brenda. Family will do you in and save you at the same time. 🙂

  10. Barbara Khan on August 24, 2016 at 2:59 pm

    Oh Ann! This was so wonderful. You are brilliant at capturing the dysfunctionality of families. Your brother could have been my brother. We had those miserably uncomfortable dinners, though my dad was never the lecturer, it was his being more silent than usual (he suffered from clinical depression from the time I was 6 until I was 10) and was always a bit on the periphery of our life, and that created the silence that threatened to crack. My brother is 8 years older than me, so while he was crashing cars, smoking weed, and skipping school, I was 8, 9, 10 years old. I had tears at the end of reading this, because I just had a long, serious conversation with my brother, now a recovering alcoholic, about the trauma that I dealt with, when he left the state to avoid going to jail (too many DUI’s) and the sheriff’s dept. stopped by weekly to ask my 13 year old self, if I knew where my brother was. Here we were, 36 years later, over coffee in Anna Maria Island, FL where nobody knew us and this little sister cried and cried as she told her big brother how it felt to want to protect her brother, but how stressful it was to get on the school bus after lying to the sheriff’s deputy – to head off to try and have a “normal” day in junior high. He said he didn’t know how awful it was for me and he apologized that large sections of his memories are gone, due to the years of heavy drinking. I think we both felt better and closer, than we had in a really long time.

    • Ann Garvin on August 24, 2016 at 8:55 pm

      Thank you so much Barbara! Also, thank you for sharing this piece of your history. It sounds like you and I share a common history. Depression in the family, law enforcement, and stress. IT’s so hard to let go of hard things. I was so angry at my brother and he me–for such a dumb reason and a reason neither of us understood. Thank you for everything that you do to support me.

      • Barbara Khan on August 24, 2016 at 10:07 pm

        Yes, I had thought I’d gotten over all this stuff, but found out recently while working through things with a therapist for some feelings of stress and being overwhelmed, that I was still feeling this trauma. It felt good to talk to him about it and to let him know I support him. We both understand each other better now. We usually hold on to grudges and grievances for the stupidest reasons. Glad you and your brother are back on track.

        • Ann Garvin on August 25, 2016 at 1:11 pm

          I also feel so lucky that we have happy endings. Some don’t and that is the hardest thing. I’m so glad you do. Also, so happy to hear you had a similar experience with honesty and conversation. Thank goodness!

  11. Nancy Pollard on August 24, 2016 at 6:09 pm

    Wonderfully to read this story Ann. It brought up many memories of us growing up.

    • Ann Garvin on August 24, 2016 at 8:52 pm

      Oh Thank you Nancy, White Pine hold such a strong place in my heart–for mostly positive times 🙂
      Especially where you and Jean are concerned.

  12. Susan Chabot on August 24, 2016 at 8:58 pm

    WHAT a fabulous story, Ann! You “capture” your thoughts and history so beautifully! I remember when Ray’s accident happened… frightening! I loved how your story ended. I cried…..all-out cried! I love and cherish you, my friend! Keep writin’!!!!xoxoox

    • Ann Garvin on August 24, 2016 at 9:05 pm

      Oh sweetie, I just love you. Thank you!

  13. Ann Zindler on August 24, 2016 at 9:47 pm

    Ann, You read this to us at the Writer’s Festival in 2015, and I have never forgotten it. When I read it again now, I could hear your voice, pauses, inflections. It’s powerful when someone who really doesn’t know you has your story stuck in his/her mind. Keep it up!

  14. Kerstin March on August 25, 2016 at 2:11 pm

    Beautifully written, Ann!

    • Ann Garvin on August 28, 2016 at 8:07 pm

      Thank you so much Kerstin 🙂

  15. Jill Hannah Anderson on August 25, 2016 at 2:58 pm

    As a woman with three brothers and no sisters, I can relate to some of your family dynamics. What a wonderful, heartfelt post!

    • Ann Garvin on August 28, 2016 at 5:10 pm

      Thanks Jill, so nice of you to say so!

  16. Tina Sears on August 29, 2016 at 12:35 pm

    Ann, This is so beautifully written and heartfelt. I loved it so much. Now I want to read everything that you have ever written. I just love your descriptions. You really have a way with words.

    • Ann Garvin on September 8, 2016 at 9:28 pm

      Thank you Tina, I’m so happy you liked it. 🙂 You also have a way with words.

  17. Julie Clarkson on September 3, 2016 at 11:58 pm

    The pure honesty of your life at that point in time is so raw and intimate. Thank you for opening your soul and sharing. I know only too well the brother sister relationship you speak of so eloquently. I’m so glad that you and Ray have made peace. May I get there some day too.

    • Ann Garvin on September 8, 2016 at 9:28 pm

      Oh Julie, thank you so much. That means so much to me. May you get there as well.

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